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The Key by ~inter4life:iconinter4life:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


It’s the logic that I fail to see
When beauty turns to rust
Why must I have the magical key
When the lock is just lost?

Do you ever feel you have the answers
But the questions are just missing?
Feels like pain from stings of cancers
While its the healing of potions hissing

Mislead in the expectations of my assumptions
Visions solid yet lack a form
What I am and who to be
Wishes lost in this vicious storm

Did I loose you in my rambling?
It’s just the question I need to ask
Why do I have the magical key
When it’s the door I cannot see
©2005-2008 ~inter4life
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The fruit of a sleepless night... not one of my best... but i tend to ramble when i write at 4 A.M so...
dedicated to all those in search for themselves...
may we one day find our place in this world
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~risingtide:iconrisingtide: Oct 27, 2005, 5:47:22 PM
This is the best poem I have read here. Im searching for myself ... but am still lost! Thank you for this poem!

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"I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you cant. How you hurt yourself on the outside to try to kill the thing on the inside."
~inter4life:iconinter4life: Oct 28, 2005, 5:46:42 AM
Thanks a lot! That means so much! well, we all are.. i guess its part of life's adventure... but thats for ur wonderful comment

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poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
~Aj07:iconAj07: Oct 28, 2005, 7:35:25 AM
AMAZING! truly amazing, its just something i would love to read over and over again, true at times u just feel so lost when u know no u reached ur goal but wat was it u were seeking?

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Forza soccerism, macro photo
i only listen to rock and roll
~inter4life:iconinter4life: Oct 28, 2005, 9:34:32 AM
Agreed... there's a reason we're friends right? =p

--
poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
~inter4life:iconinter4life: Oct 30, 2005, 6:09:45 AM
We rock! lol... its just weird how u understand me... love ya hon! (a7is il nas shakaw ba5lagi)

--
poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
~molofishy:iconmolofishy: Nov 3, 2005, 5:54:29 AM
Oh, my sack! This is brilliant...one of your best poems...the first and last stanza's are truely beautiful! Mamamia, this poem is for me; I don't know where I fit!

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Come away O human child.
To the waters and the wild.
With a faery hand in hand.
For the world's more full of weeping.
Than you can understand.
~inter4life:iconinter4life: Nov 4, 2005, 4:17:32 AM
In that case, i dedicate it to you =p... may u one day find ur place

--
poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
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